website and advertising.

**selena 31** · 19-06-2010, 08:51 PM

Just after some feedback on my website so take a look and seeif i missed anything x

Also were best to advertise as put up posters, website leaflet drop registered on childcare told people still no calls yet ?

thanks guys x

www.quackersdaycare.co.uk

**francinejayne** · 19-06-2010, 09:10 PM

Comments from your website....
Throughout there are a few 'i' - change this to uppercase 'I'.

Also on the home page you have "warm caring home from home feel were there day is.." - change 'were' to 'where'.

On the 'about us' page change 'july' to 'July'.

In fact, throughout on various pages there are a few words with capital letters that shouldn't have (dog, rabbit etc), and others that should!!!

The policies page - change 'sighn' to 'sign'.

Also throughout it might be easier to read if you make sure that after every comma you leave a space before the next word, and I also leave at least 1 (although I prefer 2) spaces after a full stop.

Sorry for being picky, it's due to my previous life spent creating IT documents that had to be correct for the customer!!

As for where to advertise, I got the most interest from childcare.co.uk - I joined (using the discount code from here) and if anyone looked at my profile, I contacted them and sent them a link to my website, and once people had seen that I got lots of interest!

Good luck!

**beccas** · 19-06-2010, 09:41 PM

i would also take your address off just have your town and contact numbers for safety reasons.

but otherwise well done

**selena 31** · 19-06-2010, 09:42 PM

Thanks for replying always have been rubbish when it comes to my grammar and spelling!

Do you think i missed any important info out ?

Blue Boy · 20-06-2010, 12:58 PM

Apart from the comments given it looks a great site.

**karen m** · 20-06-2010, 07:42 PM

looks fine apart from grammer as mention by someone else
love the rug in playroom where did you get it

**selena 31** · 20-06-2010, 07:58 PM

Hi Karen i got it from Great little trading company they have some lovely ones x

TheBTeam · 20-06-2010, 07:59 PM

On the front page, you just need to check for spaces after full stops. Also 'sympathise' 'possessions' 'feel where their day'

near the bottom of the homepage, 'As a childminder'

On the about us page 'environment' 'independence; also environment at end of activities page.

On activities page, 'opportunities' 'encouragement

On policies page 'safeguarding and on Qualifications page. Behaviour management. 'paediatric', and 'achievements.

Hope this helps.

Love the duck and the rug in the play room!

sorry picked a dodgy colour to highlight with!!!!!