letter opinion please

**emmadines** · 19-12-2008, 12:20 AM

Hi I am just getting invoices ready and thought maybe a lteer to go along side to wish a happy christmas to the families etc. anyway I have written this and your opinions would be greatfully apriciated and any surgestions on what else to put in it.

Dear parents

Would you believe it? 2009 is going to be here sooner then we think! So I thought I’d take this chance to wish you a fantastic Christmas and a Happy New Year.
Stay safe and I will look forward to see you all on 5th January 2009.

Many thanks

(yep I think Im best to call it a night lol)
thankyou xx

**Blaze** · 19-12-2008, 12:23 AM

Urmmm there's no letter!

**emmadines** · 19-12-2008, 12:27 AM

whoops!! think I need some sleep lol

**Annie_T** · 19-12-2008, 12:49 AM

looks ok to me hun x

**Blaze** · 19-12-2008, 06:12 AM

Originally Posted by emmadines

Dear parents

Would you believe it? 2009 is going to be here sooner then we think! So I thought I’d take this chance to wish you a fantastic Christmas and a Happy New Year.
Stay safe and I will look forward to see you all on 5th January 2009.

Many thanks

I would put:

To all my parents & minded children,

Would you believe it? 2009 is already upon us!!!! I thought I'd take this opportunity to wish you a fantastic Christmas and a Happy New Year. Stay safe over this festive period & I look forward to seeing you all on the 5th January 2009.

Best wishes Emma