Do you like my poem?

[Helen Dempster]

We're doing all about minibeasts this week, and I wrote this little poem - thought I'd share (hope you like it).

Minibeasts, minibeasts, where do you hide?
Minibeasts, minibeasts, are you inside...
That old stump of tree over there in the woods?
Or under that stone, now that would be good!
I only want to watch you, to see how you live,
I promise not to hurt you, and that I will give...
You back to nature when I am done.
I think you're amazing for such a small one,
You're the size of my nail, and that's not very big,
Oh wait, I can see you laying there on that twig,
You're so very beautiful, though some won't agree,
I could sit here for ever, just you and me,
But for now I must leave you to get on with your day,
So goodbye little friend, I must be on my way.

[babs]

great i love poems cant write them though....

[SparklingGems]

That is fantastic what a lovely poem bet your mindees loved it. I sometimes write a few of my own but nothing as good as that. Welldone

[sonia ann]

wish I could write like that.......thats so good ....would you mind if i copied it for my mini-beast board???

[sarah707]

That is lovely!

[angeldelight]

That is lovely

Well done

Angel xx

[Twinkles]

I like it !

Very sweet.

[Winnie]

I love it

[Helen Dempster]

wish I could write like that.......thats so good ....would you mind if i copied it for my mini-beast board???

Course I don't mind, go ahead

[sonia ann]

Course I don't mind, go ahead

thank you....I promise to give you credit for it

[Fabby]

Fabby!!!!!!

[Helen Dempster]

thank you....I promise to give you credit for it

don't worry about that hun - LOL

[patevans]

aww I love it

[Blue Boy]

Thank you for that. I have printed off a copy as our theme for June is Minibeasts so we can use it then

[tracey36]

lovely poem wish i could make up something like that

[Toothfairy]

It's fab

[TheBTeam]

very clever, really like it!

[Monkey1]

Lovely Poem

[Helen Dempster]

Just remember, when I'm rich and famous, you met me here first! LOL