1st ob please have a look and advise me

[SparklingGems]

This is my first observation.

Please can you tell me anything I have missed off or could do differently.

Thank you

[francinejayne]

I am a complete novice too, but it looks good to me!

[sarah707]

That looks nice!

[miss mopple]

Looks good

On the evaluation bit I would be inclinded to mention how he was able to celebrate his own achievements

[SparklingGems]

Ah Thank you everyone for your kind comments.

I will mention in evaluation about celebrating. Thank you

[Polly2]

Looks brill

[angiemog]

looks great x

[michaldr]

I cant view this attachment for some reason but would love to see what you have done as Im a bit confused myself! is there another way? thanx

[Pauline]

I cant view this attachment for some reason but would love to see what you have done as Im a bit confused myself! is there another way? thanx

You can't see attachments as a very new member, this is to protect members hard work. If you visit the Member Information section it is all explained in there as to how you can get access.

Main thing is to join in