Childminder in New Malden, Surrey

[Pauline]

Anonymous listing, posted on behalf of a childminder in New Malden Surrey:

http://newmaldenchildminder.weebly.com/

[catswhiskers]

Hi Sarah, you've done a great job with your website. It's very thorough and informative and eye-catching.

There's just one thing I picked up on and that's the part where you say you will use the garden in the summer. I use my garden all year round, spring, summer, autumn, winter so maybe you could just omit the summer bit and say "all year round" or something?

Outdoor space has to be there for the EYFS and at my last inspection this was mentioned even though it was November time!

Also your heading Fee's and in the next paragraph you state fee's but the apostrophe isn't needed. It's just fees.

Good luck.

[catswhiskers]

Sorry forgot to say about your heading and malden should have a capital M.

Also on your front page you've put a capital V for vacancies, should be lower case.

Cow's milk should be cows milk.

Also, you've spelt centres wrong e.g. soft play centers.

Sorry if being picky but proof-reader coming out in me!