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[nat222]

https://sites.google.com/site/eastburnchildminders/

please can you leave feedback on my website. please be critical any advice is good advice. Thanks :)

[Pauline]

Thanks for the link :thumbsup:

[Alibali]

Looks lovely, well done. One thing confused me though, you state that you offer an all in fee to include nappies and wipes etc, but the on the same page you state parents are to provide nappies and wipes etc.

Do you have 2 different rates, one all inclusive and a normal fee? If so it's not very clear, maybe best to re-word a wee bit:thumbsup:

[nat222]

Thanks it is two different fees i have changed it does it sound ok?

[Pixie dust]

Hi
You have lots of lovely information on there but I have noticed a few errors sorry:blush: . Firstly it should be I not i, First Aid says iFrst , under activities it says treading should that be threading!

[nat222]

Thanks have changed what you mentioned apart from where you said i do you mean all of them need to be capitial.

[Pixie dust]

Thanks have changed what you mentioned apart from where you said i do you mean all of them need to be capitial.


Yes when you say "I" it should be a capital letter.

[nat222]

Thanks i have changed it

[lorimac]

Quite a few spelling mistakes and puctuation, hope that doesn't sound cheeky but would put me off if I was a parent.

[Aimi-jo]

Very well done, i loved it. Other than the spelling/grammar mistakes but i think you need to sit with someone who can edit them there and then, I find it really hard to see my own grammar mistakes.
So much information, lovely pictures, Particularly liked your explanation of 'EYFS' Easy for parents to understand.
:clapping:

[nat222]

I think most spelling mistakes are gone.

[catswhiskers]

Hi - I think your website is really well done and you have a lovely setting.

The park and animals are really a bonus and I think you will get a lot of enquiries.

I hope you don't mind me pointing out that you do still have some spelling errors and you haven't corrected the i which should be I in every instance, using a small i is for text talk, facebook, etc.

You also have a lot of apostrophes which shouldn't be there and capital letters which shouldn't be capitals.

In opening hours, activitys should be activities and daily diarys should be diaries.

In fees, encur should be incur.

In food and drinks, inline is two words in line and humas is humus.

In outings and activities, providing should be provided.

Acomidate should be accommodate.

In relevant qualifications, been a mother should be being a mother.

Hope this helps!

[Kelly]

Nice website, hope you get lots of people visiting!

Did notice that in EYFS section you mention the 5 ECM outcomes, but you've only got 4 in there (missing Enjoy & Achieve)

[Katiekoo]

As others have said there are a few little punctuation errors that I'm sure you will get sorted (I always get my friend to look over my writing!). Overall I think it's lovely, parents will love to see the pictures of the chickens, your home, feeding ducks etc. It looks like the children will have a lovely time at your setting. Very well done, you should have lots of chilren filling your house very soon! I've found my website gets me lots of enquiries, good luck :)

[nat222]

Thanks I have changed all the errors that had been suggested I will get some one to check the rest of spelling and punctuation as i have never been too good with this.

[Jiorjiina]

I really love your bit of artwork at the bottom of your home page, where did you find it?