Feedback please

[claire'scherubs]

Can you take a look at my website please and give some feedback, first time ever I have built one, soooooooo??????

Thanks guys and gals

http://clairescheekycherubs.webs.com

[Pauline]

Hi Claire, thanks for the link but it doesn't work :(

I've let your post through but could you correct the link so that it works, seems to be something wrong. :)

I've had a quick look at your site - on the contact page there is some HTML still showing, you haven't got the breaks right somewhere.

and on the home page, it says "Home old" not sure is the old should be there?

Hope that helps :)

[claire'scherubs]

Thank you I will take a look now x

[beccas]

it s good

check your spelling though although i am a crap speller did notice HOme old in your menu... and why does it say old????

It also doesnt say what area you are in.

just thought i would say i got pauline to do mine so well done on doingit yourself

[claire'scherubs]

Hi thanks for all that, the link should work now, the home old has gone and I will put in my area, going back to it now, thanks for the feedback x

[Pauline]

Yes it does, thanks Claire. :)

[Chimps Childminding]

Well done! Looks great!!!!

[shelly2012]

Well done Pauline also done mine so good for you.

What about putting on 'our day' your routine

[Daddy Day Care]

Looks good, just a couple of things

About my setting – “loving and safe enviroment” = Environment
“and crafts activities and childrens'” = children’s (I think)
“I do my upmost to” = I THINK its 2 words up most
“different food allegies” = allergies
“which aids in orgainising” = organising
“away fom my setting” = from
“ National Childminding Assocation” = Association

Rates and services - , “meals incur an additional costs” either take the s of costs or get rid of the an

Home page - “I wish you every sucess with” = Success


Gareth
xxx

[Pauline]

“I do my upmost to” = I THINK its 2 words up most

Gareth
xxx

I think it should actually be utmost - all one word. UT not UP :)

[Daddy Day Care]

I think it should actually be utmost - all one word. UT not UP :)

ooops yup :blush: :blush:

[doodles]

Its really good!! Wish i could do one!

[moljak]

Well done and good advice so far :)

I wouldn't know where to start and have to thank my brother for mine :)

[claire'scherubs]

Thanks all, I will take a look again and change the spelling etc, appreciate the feedback xx

[little miss chatterbox]

looks lovely! what do you use for your outside covered area?

[claire'scherubs]

We put up a wooden frame outside the patio doors and then its got corrugated plastic sheets across is, does that make sense???