Tired
04-01-2010, 06:10 PM
I have written a newsletter, and want to remind the parents not to hang about for 20 mins each morning.
Obviously, I have to put it more diplomatically than that, but I'm struggling to make it sound friendly.
I have said this so far, but I think I need help form you more experienced people, cos I think this sounds bossy.
"As you know, the mornings here are really busy. I like to have the opportunity to talk to all of you as you arrive, but this is not always possible with so many people around.
To make this easier, could I ask you all to drop your children off at the agreed time, and to make the drop off as quick as possible.
If you have things you need to tell me, please do so, but if you need my full attention, it is better to talk to me in the afternoon when you collect your children.
I appreciate your co-operation in this, and hope that it is a better way to make sure you and your children all get the time you need."
Please help, cos I don't want to send it out like this, I think ill offend someone.thanks
Obviously, I have to put it more diplomatically than that, but I'm struggling to make it sound friendly.
I have said this so far, but I think I need help form you more experienced people, cos I think this sounds bossy.
"As you know, the mornings here are really busy. I like to have the opportunity to talk to all of you as you arrive, but this is not always possible with so many people around.
To make this easier, could I ask you all to drop your children off at the agreed time, and to make the drop off as quick as possible.
If you have things you need to tell me, please do so, but if you need my full attention, it is better to talk to me in the afternoon when you collect your children.
I appreciate your co-operation in this, and hope that it is a better way to make sure you and your children all get the time you need."
Please help, cos I don't want to send it out like this, I think ill offend someone.thanks