Daily diary- competition

[Ripeberry]

OK, having a silly half-hour and feeling a bit bored. I'm going to put a header sheet in my mindee's diary, for the parents to know what its about and to hopefully encourage them to tell me about their weekends (the child's) and maybe even include a comment.
I was thinking of a little rhyme or poem but i'm no good at them, would you like to have a little virtual competition?
So far i've done:
This diary is a record of my day,
Read about how much fun i've had today
How many bottles of milk i drank and,
how much i've had to eat,
My! what a lot of nappies (may scrap this line :p )

Go on! See if you can do better (i'm sure someone will :) )

[wendywu]

This is so you can read all about me
The sick, poop, dribble and pee
How long i sleep and when i,m awake
And all you have to do is read it for goodness sake! :laughing:

[Chatterbox Childcare]

OK, having a silly half-hour and feeling a bit bored. I'm going to put a header sheet in my mindee's diary, for the parents to know what its about and to hopefully encourage them to tell me about their weekends (the child's) and maybe even include a comment.
I was thinking of a little rhyme or poem but i'm no good at them, would you like to have a little virtual competition?
So far i've done:
This diary is a record of my day,
Read about how much fun i've had today
How many bottles of milk i drank and,
how much i've had to eat,
My! what a lot of nappies (may scrap this line :p )

Go on! See if you can do better (i'm sure someone will :) )

Let's see

This diary is a record of my day
so you can see how I have fun and play
What I have done and where I have been
Who I met and what I've seen

You can see at a peep
what time I lay down and went to sleep
what I ate and what I drank
and the number of nappies that sometimes stank!

Please don't glance and close this book
go on be daring and have a look
When you finished don't be shy
add your own notes and don't ask why

Months from now we will read this book
and laugh a lot at the little time it took
It will make us smile and make us grin
and be glad we had these little pages to look back in

How is that for a start?

[wendywu]

Very good debbie, now do one for the back page :laughing:

[venus89]

This little book is all about me
It tells you what I had for tea
And all the toys on which I've slobbered
And will you read it? Nah - can't be bothered :D

[Ripeberry]

Debbie the Bard is the best so far :clapping:

[miffy]

Debbie that's very good.

Wendy's made me laugh though!

Miffy xx

[Lick'le Oakes]

This little book is all about me
It tells you what I had for tea
And all the toys on which I've slobbered
And will you read it? Nah - can't be bothered :D

:laughing: :laughing: :laughing:

[It's a small world]

This Diary tells you about my day
The different things I did and say
What I ate and how I slept
The different people that I met (meaning playgroups)
Each day I learn about different things
We even have a good old sing
As you can see it's been lots of fun
Even when there's been no sun
Do not worry I've been just fine
And looking forward to next time.

Now please take time to read this book
It will not hurt to have a look
See the word's that (your name) has wrote
If any queries just make a note.


(Not that good ..but it ryhmes....I guess :huh: )
Thought I'd have a go though.......:blush:

[ORKSIE]

You lot are brill, will have a go later:clapping:

[It's a small world]

This Diary tells you about my day
The different things I did and say
What I ate and how I slept
The different people that I met (meaning playgroups)
Each day I learn about different things
We even have a good old sing
It tells you all the things I've done
Even when there's been no sun
Do not worry I've been just fine
And looking forward to next time.

Now please take time to read this book
It will not hurt to have a look
See the word's that (your name) has wrote
If any queries just make a note.

I hope to think in several years
We'll look back through happy tears
At how I've changed in many ways
And all because of 'happy days'

(Not that good ..but it ryhmes....I guess :huh: )
Thought I'd have a go though.......:blush:

Just added a bit more..I'm quite into this...even though I'm not very good .:blush: Having fun though ...:laughing:

[Monkey1]

Let's see

This diary is a record of my day
so you can see how I have fun and play
What I have done and where I have been
Who I met and what I've seen

You can see at a peep
what time I lay down and went to sleep
what I ate and what I drank
and the number of nappies that sometimes stank!

Please don't glance and close this book
go on be daring and have a look
When you finished don't be shy
add your own notes and don't ask why

Months from now we will read this book
and laugh a lot at the little time it took
It will make us smile and make us grin
and be glad we had these little pages to look back in

How is that for a start?

Love it Debbie! Might have to print that one!

[Monkey1]

This little book is all about me
It tells you what I had for tea
And all the toys on which I've slobbered
And will you read it? Nah - can't be bothered :D

:thumbsup: :clapping: :clapping: Says it all really!!!!!!!

[newandlearning]

I wanna have a go too....

This is my diary .. it shows my day
It shows where I have gone to play
It talks of dragons I have slane
The magic places I been ..
not just in place but in my head
The wood, the farm .. and when I rest
Exotic foods .. my five a day
A finally then I come away...
And now I'm with the ones I love
Lets look inside my diary mum
it shows my day and what I've seen
and give you memories which i have gleened!


:laughing: :laughing: .. ahh.. I quite enjoyed that!

What a lovely Idea!xx

[It's a small world]

I wanna have a go too....

This is my diary .. it shows my day
It shows where I have gone to play
It talks of dragons I have slane
The magic places I been ..
not just in place but in my head
The wood, the farm .. and when I rest
Exotic foods .. my five a day
A finally then I come away...
And now I'm with the ones I love
Lets look inside my diary mum
it shows my day and what I've seen
and give you memories which i have gleened!




:laughing: :laughing: .. ahh.. I quite enjoyed that!

What a lovely Idea!xx

That's lovely you've covered lots of things here :welldone:

[helenlc]

My daily diary tells of my day
The food, the crafts and all that play
Please take the time to read it through
It was what I did while I missed you

:blush:

[OrlandoBelle]

My daily diary tells of my day
The food, the crafts and all that play
Please take the time to read it through
It was what I did while I missed you

:blush:

I love that Helen! Do you mind if I use it? :)

[gegele]

i like that short and sweet!!:clapping: :clapping:

[sarah707]

Wow we have some talented people on here don't we? :D

[Allie]

You lot made me laugh and wonder how many of our parents do read all the entries we make?

My lot either read and add to it or never look!


Allie

[Mollymop]

This is my diary is tell you my day

What I did and how I played

With all the great things we like to do

I am here today and you are too

In my mind, I think of you

I have behaved the best way that I could

how to share and to be good

I am good as gold and looked after as treasure

I love my minder but miss you more than ever


__ bit too emotional I think - but just came out as I typed! ekk

[nic76]

these are fab well done ladies

[TheBTeam]

My daily diary tells of my day
The food, the crafts and all that play
Please take the time to read it through
It was what I did while I missed you

:blush:

Really like this, just wanted to add a bit, to try and get them to write, so here goes

'And if you feel that you too can put pen to paper,
We can look back someday later'

[francinejayne]

Really like this, just wanted to add a bit, to try and get them to write, so here goes

'And if you feel that you too can put pen to paper,
We can look back someday later'


That's lovely - would both author's mind if I use that in my diaries?