Leaflet

[Ant_h18]

Hi all can i put my leaflet on here which i have done on here to show everyone to see if it looks ok.

[miffy]

Can't see it - did you forget to attach it?

Miffy xx

[sarah707]

Yes you can! Just do it as an attachment.

If you have any problems we will try and help you

[Ant_h18]

Thank you I wasn't to sure if I could put it up here goes. can anyone let me know if I need to add anythink in, take somethink out, also any spelling mistakes.

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[flowerpots]

Looks great

[tinynippers]

hi, just had a read i think a leaflet is a fab idea and looks great. my only comment read reading it through is i find it a bit confusing is it just yourself that is reg or both yourself and partner as sometimes it says I and other times it says we. and swaps throughout.

apart from that it look fab xxx

[miffy]

Looks lovely - hope it works for you

Miffy xx

[Ant_h18]

thank you all.. Ive sort it out from me and i to we and our.. now i just got to find someone to print them

[debratina]

hi
well done it looks really great
best wishes for the future
debra

[Louise317]

looks lovely x

[missymood]

Looks lovely. Love the pictures
Hope you don't mind me saying that there are a few spelling mistakes sort of thing I always do and then print off! such as:

where both proud should be we're both proud
an CRB shoudl be a crb
Not sure if i like the split words and may be a bit too wordy for a flier but that only my opinion

Well done though hope you gets lots of business

[Ant_h18]

Thank you i have made them right,

[Kirsty B's]

They look brilliant, very professional.

xxxx

[Toothfairy]

lovely looking leaflet but it has a few spelling/grammar mistakes.

become not be-come
we're not were
a crb not an CRB
a NVQ not an NVQ
childcare not child-care
enviroment not envi-roment
respecting not respect-ing
always not al-ways
legislation not legis-lation
protection not protec-tion
Our overall not my overall
children not chil-dren

also you don't have any contact details on there but this may be deliberate.

Hope that helps