Opinions on this logo please

[sprinkles]

I've just had this logo designed for me. What do you think? What would you change? I'm thinking a different sun?

[Traceyx]

Oohhh i love this, very nice. Where did you make it from?

[silvermist]

I like it too, bright and cheerful but I agree with you the suns face looks a little strange. No offence intended xx

[Rick]

The sun looks ever so slightly menacing! Will this go on all your correspondence? Mine has a lot of blue in it and that's always the ink to run out first! Lots of colour on yours! Looks good though

[sprinkles]

The sun looks ever so slightly menacing! Will this go on all your correspondence? Mine has a lot of blue in it and that's always the ink to run out first! Lots of colour on yours! Looks good though

I hadn't even thought about the ink I'm not sure if it will go on everything, might just do some writing for p&ps etc, but it will be on business cards, advertising things etc.

[sarah707]

If it's supposed to be a rainbow round the edge then it's - Richard of York gave battle in vain for the colours

Would it look better without the sun and cloud? Are they just a bit too much when it's shrunk down small to go on a business card or letter head for example??

I really like it though it's bright and cheerful and shouts which you need to stand out from the crowd

[sprinkles]

If it's supposed to be a rainbow round the edge then it's - Richard of York gave battle in vain for the colours

Would it look better without the sun and cloud? Are they just a bit too much when it's shrunk down small to go on a business card or letter head for example??

I really like it though it's bright and cheerful and shouts which you need to stand out from the crowd

I was looking at it thinking 'that's not right' lol.

I never thought of it without the sun and clouds. What about making the sun a bit more fun but putting it in the middle where the other sun is and taking away the clouds?

[Little Pickles]

Is it just me ....or does the cloud look a bit worried ?

[sprinkles]

Is it just me ....or does the cloud look a bit worried ?

I did think that

[Rubybubbles]

bit too busy for me

sorry

[ivy]

love it but also agree that the sun looked menacing .

[TAZ]

Nice & colourful but think it might look better without the sun & cloud.

[sprinkles]

Nice & colourful but think it might look better without the sun & cloud.

Have asked him to make the sun look a bit more fun and put it in the middle instead of the sunrise and take the clouds away

[Shamai]

In my opinion I don't think you need another sun around the edge as you've got one in the middle - maybe somehow make some sun rays come out of the one in the middle with a smiley face?? Not too sure about the clouds as it came across as unhappy when I first looked at it. Hope I've not offended anyone xx

[sprinkles]

In my opinion I don't think you need another sun around the edge as you've got one in the middle - maybe somehow make some sun rays come out of the one in the middle with a smiley face?? Not too sure about the clouds as it came across as unhappy when I first looked at it. Hope I've not offended anyone xx

Thanks I've asked him to make the sun round the outside more fun and replace the one in the middle with the fun one then take the clouds away. He's doing it just now

[RuthJ]

Have asked him to make the sun look a bit more fun and put it in the middle instead of the sunrise and take the clouds away

Agree with the others that the faces aren't quite right! Looking forward to seeing the updated one!

[sprinkles]

Agree with the others that the faces aren't quite right! Looking forward to seeing the updated one!

The sun had a huge nose Just waiting on him sending the new one over. I've got someone else designing one for me too so will see what they come up with.

[lynncjt]

Really like it! Just wondered about the font? Would children be able to read it with the swiggly bits?

[sprinkles]

Really like it! Just wondered about the font? Would children be able to read it with the swiggly bits?

I wondered this too, may ask him to change it.

[sprinkles]

Ok so here is the updated one. I'm thinking of changing the font and the colour of the Bright Beginnings - thinking there's too much pink with it being right next to the pink on the rainbow?