C G childcare

[christinegrout]

hi,

my name is christine and this is my website have a good look around and go to facebook page and tick the like box please.

If any one is interested in my services then please contact me.
http://www.cgchildcare.co.uk

[catswhiskers]

Hi Christine,

A good website!

Just to say that 'i' as on the front page a few times should be a capital 'I'.

Also the names of schools, areas, have a capital letter.

Just a punctuation error but otherwise really good.

[stephym]

Hi Christine

Lovely website! I see that you are based in Carshalton, I'm in Old Coulsdon so not very far from you. I'm only just starting out and have my Ofsted registration visit on Monday (aaaargh and aaaargh!).

I'd love to pick your brains regarding places to visit within the local area. I've made contact with the local children's centres and am trying to build a portfolio of interesting places to visit with the children so if you have any suggestions that would be wonderful.

Thanks

Stephanie

[Nature'sKids!]

Maybe you could rephrase your introductory sentence as you've got "and I am" 4 times in one sentence.