Feedback on website please

[Bluebell]

hi
I have just done myself a website. I have never done a website before and I have done all the writing and pictures myself. I am hoping once i get more photos I can update them and there are other bits I keep tweaking too. The hardest page I have found is the fees page as I found that it was quite wordy and maybe all that official stuff about what to bring and when to pay may sound a bit off putting.
I have vacancies from September and I really would like to fill them but the area seems very quiet at the moment. Any advice on what you find particularly attracts parents when they view a website would be much appreciated!

http://www.bluelionchildcare.co.uk

[catswhiskers]

Hi Juliet - I think your website is great, some lovely photos and activities.

Just to say that you have some spelling mistakes.

On the first page it shoud be Early Years (with an s) and capital letters for Early Years Foundation Stage.

You have spelt inspire wrong.

On qualifications you have spelt Registered wrong.

Can't remember where it is but accommodate should have one m.

[Mamma4Ya]

Looking great

[wendy222]

iw wont let me open it

[Optimalstar]

I'm on the iPad so can't access your site either. You've used flash player so an issue with the iPad. Will look later on one of the laptops when my children put them down

[boxtree7]

very nice and straight forward

[wendy222]

very nice love well done xxx

[Mamma4Ya]

iw wont let me open it

I think their site was down earlier it happened to me too

[catswhiskers]

Made a mistake telling you accommodate has one m - sorry was late last night!

[Polly2]

Great site hope you fill your space soon

[Bluebell]

hi - thank you for your comments and positive feedback!
cats whiskers - Thank You! I have corrected mistakes thank you - have read and reread so many times but hadn't spotted - also the accommodate - I actually thought you meant I had spelt it with 1 'm' because I corrected it to 2 on the last page!