Website Feedback Please

[Jo Jo]

hi all i've just made my own website, i would appreciate all your comments, its the first time ive done something like this
Thanks in Advance
Jo Jo

http://joanneschildmindingservice.webs.com

[Pauline]

thanks for the link

[Tinglesnark]

i really like it! well done!

[Jo Jo]

i really like it! well done!

Thank you

[flowerpots]

thats really nice, i love the colour scheme.

[Jo Jo]

thats really nice, i love the colour scheme.

Thank you

[Weeze1979]

Hey JoJo,
Just had a look - its really lovely!
The colour scheme is really nice, love the cloud background, and the content is fab!

If you want feedback, there were two things that jumped out at me......

* In your opening statement on your homepage you've put 'were' instead of 'where' (2nd paragraph).

* In the qualifications section, the dates jump about a bit. I understand you want the most relevant and important ones at the top, maybe you could do them in two sections? Main childcare qualifications first, then relevant training days/courses in a seperate section underneath. In descending date order?

Please don't take offense, I'm just really picky at some things, OCD I'm afraid!!
I really really liked the whole site!

Weeze x

[Susana0600]

It's very professional, congratulations

[Jo Jo]

It's very professional, congratulations

Thank You

[jelly15]

Really nice site

[Jo Jo]

Hey JoJo,
Just had a look - its really lovely!
The colour scheme is really nice, love the cloud background, and the content is fab!

If you want feedback, there were two things that jumped out at me......

* In your opening statement on your homepage you've put 'were' instead of 'where' (2nd paragraph).

* In the qualifications section, the dates jump about a bit. I understand you want the most relevant and important ones at the top, maybe you could do them in two sections? Main childcare qualifications first, then relevant training days/courses in a seperate section underneath. In descending date order?

Please don't take offense, I'm just really picky at some things, OCD I'm afraid!!
I really really liked the whole site!

Weeze x

Thank you so much thats great advice much apprieciated xx

[ZoeAlli]

Well done! It's looking good.

[jo.jo76]

Well done, it looks really good x

[Jo Jo]

Well done, it looks really good x

Thank you x

[Blaze]

Nice website

(Sorry the only feedback I had was abouth the dates jumping around a bit & that's already been given)!

[Jo Jo]

Nice website

(Sorry the only feedback I had was abouth the dates jumping around a bit & that's already been given)!

Thank You

[heidicat]

Hi, it looks really nice.
2 things... you've missed a closed bracked ) at the 2pm time on your typical day...
and on your opening hours you've put 7:30 - 6.00 should have : or .

Just me being picky...

hope you get lots of business from it, might make one myself soon

x

[Carol M]

One more tiny thing. In Food and Nutrition.... chesses strips. Should it be cheese strips?
Well done, good informative website in the making.
Carol xx

[Jo Jo]

Hi, it looks really nice.
2 things... you've missed a closed bracked ) at the 2pm time on your typical day...
and on your opening hours you've put 7:30 - 6.00 should have : or .

Just me being picky...

hope you get lots of business from it, might make one myself soon

x

Thanks for that hun i will change that cheers

[Jo Jo]

One more tiny thing. In Food and Nutrition.... chesses strips. Should it be cheese strips?
Well done, good informative website in the making.
Carol xx

Thank you didnt realise ive read through it so many times just needed someone else to point out what ive missed cheers