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katie0183
14-05-2008, 01:49 PM
How would people word the following letters.....

A variation to care for overnight

(i know whats supposed to go in it but just am stumped on how to word it)

An advertisment sent to companies to explain im a childminder and would they like to give my info to people on mat leave etc

(this has to be mega professional and have alot of my info in)

I used to be an administrator and office manager and used to be able to do mail shots and important documents in my sleep but these two im absolutely stumped... any help or have a template i can follow?

Kind Regards

Kate
x

angeldelight
15-05-2008, 09:25 AM
I will bump this back up for you Kate

Maybe you can tell us what you have put yourself - you never know you may have worded them ok yourself

If not you can always pm one of us mods we are always happy to help

Angel xx

ajs
15-05-2008, 09:27 AM
sorry despite what john said about a letter i helped him with i am rubbish at letter writing.

maybe just state the facts on the ofsted one and don't waffle too much ( my problem is i always make it too flowery)

sarah707
15-05-2008, 09:35 AM
If you put what you want to say, I will happily have a play with it / tweak it for you :D