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18-06-2011, 08:00 PM
Hi all can i put my leaflet on here which i have done on here to show everyone to see if it looks ok.

18-06-2011, 09:15 PM
Can't see it - did you forget to attach it?

Miffy xx

18-06-2011, 09:21 PM
Yes you can! Just do it as an attachment.

If you have any problems we will try and help you :D

19-06-2011, 07:23 AM
Thank you I wasn't to sure if I could put it up here goes. can anyone let me know if I need to add anythink in, take somethink out, also any spelling mistakes.

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19-06-2011, 07:25 AM
Looks great :thumbsup:

19-06-2011, 07:31 AM
hi, just had a read i think a leaflet is a fab idea and looks great. my only comment read reading it through is i find it a bit confusing is it just yourself that is reg or both yourself and partner as sometimes it says I and other times it says we. and swaps throughout.

apart from that it look fab xxx

19-06-2011, 08:11 AM
Looks lovely - hope it works for you

Miffy xx

19-06-2011, 12:42 PM
thank you all.. Ive sort it out from me and i to we and our.. now i just got to find someone to print them

19-06-2011, 02:26 PM
well done it looks really great
best wishes for the future

19-06-2011, 02:53 PM
looks lovely x

19-06-2011, 03:09 PM
Looks lovely. Love the pictures
Hope you don't mind me saying that there are a few spelling mistakes sort of thing I always do and then print off! such as:

where both proud should be we're both proud
an CRB shoudl be a crb
Not sure if i like the split words and may be a bit too wordy for a flier but that only my opinion:D

Well done though hope you gets lots of business:thumbsup:

19-06-2011, 07:58 PM
Thank you i have made them right, :)

Kirsty B's
19-06-2011, 11:40 PM
They look brilliant, very professional.


20-06-2011, 06:47 AM
lovely looking leaflet but it has a few spelling/grammar mistakes.

become not be-come
we're not were
a crb not an CRB
a NVQ not an NVQ
childcare not child-care
enviroment not envi-roment
respecting not respect-ing
always not al-ways
legislation not legis-lation
protection not protec-tion
Our overall not my overall
children not chil-dren

also you don't have any contact details on there but this may be deliberate.

Hope that helps :thumbsup: