EYFS Diary - Parental contribution Poem -Your help and opinions please

[smartie]

I've just done my EYFS training... and I am very enthused. Just making up my new 'Learning Diaries' for each individual child.

I would welcome your comments - and hopefully improvements on a poem I have quickly written to 'try to encourage Parents to make a written comment'. Some Parents are brilliant at this - others seem reluctant.

So.......


This is My Diary
I'll read this someday
Please write in your comments
Share your thoughts on my day
OR
Share my laughs and my play
OR
Share your thoughts and my play
Because in years to come
my interest will be
what Mum and Dad wrote
about 'Smart Little Me'.

Has anybody made up something better ???? Please say yes !!

Anybody interested in sharing EYFS paperwork given to them by their Local Authority. Please PM me if you would like to look at what the south west are using.

[miffy]

I love your poem and I'd go for the first option

May well be pinching that idea

Will pm you as like to look at the paperwork

miffy xx

[Pudding Girl]

first option here too - you are really creative, I like that idea :)

[Pipsqueak]

Yep I'd go for the first option too and that is a really wonderful poem and very attention grabbing too:clapping: :clapping:

Copyrighted?????:D May have to borrow that one too!!!

[littletreasures]

I like the poem, first line for me too.

I will pm you for paperwork, as we have nothing!!

Jules

[crazybones]

I like the first one too. Great idea. Well done.

[sarah707]

That sounds lovely! I like the first line too... :D

[Kelly]

Fab idea that may get parents thinking, I'd go for the first line to

Kelly

[ma7ie]

What a lovely poem. I would definately go for the first line too. :D

[smartie]

Thanks everyone.

I have to admit I did this in maybe 2 mins.

Thought you would all have something much better and feel quite 'shy' at your lovely comments.

I would be very honoured if you would like to use it. Please do - thank you!

I didn't realise you would all be so keen to share paperwork.
Please give me a few days to either scan or transfer this paperwork into the computer and then will send it all out to you.

[Tatia]

Smartie, that's lovely!

[Polly2]

Great poem

I like the first option too :thumbsup:

[devoncm]

Great poem, ive not been to my training yet so good to hear from others that it isnt too bad, where in south west are you?

[deeb66]

I think it is a great poem

Hope you don't mind if I pinch the idea too :D

[muminamini]

What a super poem - I think great minds must all think alike as I like the first line too
Thanks for sharing!

[elaineg]

Hi, deffo the first line for me. can I pm you for a peek at the forms.

love Elaine XXX

[jmoff]

great poem...hmmm, may have to use it when I make new diaries...

Thank you

Jana x

[ruby]

what a lovely poem

first line for me too

cathy

[Monkey1]

Lovely poem, well done x

[kaz1501]

:) lovely poem, really sweet :)
I have pm'd you for the paperwork too. :)

thanks for sharing
Karen

[laura2kidz]

Lovely poem I also love the first line. Would it be possible for you to send me the paperwork as well, I am in the south West and currently have no information on eyfs. Thanks. Laura

[Tily Bud]

I love the poem xx

[Lou]

whereabouts in south west are you from?

[Shivvie]

Hi. This is my first post on here! I think your poem is great, I like the first choice too.

I'll PM you for the paperwork too if you don't mind (once I get the hang of how to do it!):)

[chels55]

that is really good well done, i would go for the first option

[Linda]

The poem is lovely, this my first post. Will be using that pom if thats ok.:clapping:

[Heaven Scent]

What a lovely poem clever clever you particularly as you wrote it so quickly. I think I'll pm you too.

:)

[sarah707]

The poem is lovely, this my first post. Will be using that pom if thats ok.:clapping:

Hello Linda! Congratulations on making your first post... don't forget to pop into say hello and introduce yourself! :D

[buildingblocks]

Ooh I like that can I use your poem on my dairys I promise I will put your name on to give you the credit

please
please
please

[lindylou]

Nice poem i would pick the first line
Linxx

[Cammie Doodle]

Oh Smartie, what a lovely verse. ( I also think the 1st line is the best) It is going on my new folders (with your kind permission )I think it is so apt and hopefully will make Parents realise all this extra paperwork is for the benefit of their children and will add their comments for the child to read in years to come.
I too would like paperwork (when you get the chance ) I will pm you.
Thanks again
June

[netty]

nice poem,like the first line.
Netty xxx

[mum22]

It is fantastic - i'be also PM'd you
1st option for me.

xhelen

[breezy]

wonderful poem, you could sell it and any others you have as a great sideline!:)

[nannan]

love the poem, well done,