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gegele
28-04-2009, 10:07 PM
i've been struggling to make advertisement formy setting as i don't know what to write really.

today i came up with those. what do you HONESTLY think. don't hold any punches, i wan't to know what i need to change, add, remove.....

the big one is for my car windows (and my neighbours:blush: :blush: )

the other ones are for the schools

what do you call before and after school?? availabilities sounds weird no???

thanks

Tatjana
28-04-2009, 10:11 PM
I would just leave it as '3 before and after school'

Please don't be offended, but to me it looks like the frogs are having sex.

xx

gegele
28-04-2009, 10:13 PM
:laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:

christine e
28-04-2009, 10:14 PM
How about ' 3 before and after school places available'

Cx

Tatjana
28-04-2009, 10:15 PM
Phew! i'm glad i didn't upset you:)

xx

youarewhatyoueat
28-04-2009, 10:57 PM
They're fine, but whats with the frogs they look like they're shagging.Lol:laughing: :laughing: :laughing: :laughing:

Blaze
28-04-2009, 10:57 PM
I like the frogs! I would have some font in a dark green to echo the frog colour & possibly a border of sorts...but then I am nitpicking!

gegele
28-04-2009, 11:00 PM
no sounds good, but i'm not really good with computer so it might take me a while for the border but the colour is a definate...my Mr MOnk side like this colour coordinating business!!!:jump for joy: :jump for joy: :jump for joy:

angeldelight
29-04-2009, 06:24 AM
Good luck hope they bring in some work

Angel xx

huggableshelly
29-04-2009, 06:34 AM
well done you have done a great job, I cant offer anything different to what has already been said.

sarah707
29-04-2009, 06:43 AM
Instead of 'breakfast and dinner' I would be tempted to put 'Meals, drinks and snacks' because it's not 'dinner' to everyone (I call it lunch or tea for example)... and if you have part timers they won't be around for all meals... does that make sense?

Flexible hours for shift workers

Vacancies, not availabilities

Where's your company name? I think if you put that under your frogs it might explain a lot :o :laughing:

Once you've got opinions can I suggest you take these off because they have your full contact details and they are on an open forum :D

huggableshelly
29-04-2009, 06:45 AM
I've already called her 20 times and done heavy breathing ....

LOL I bet its not really her number though oops who did I call?

PixiePetal
29-04-2009, 06:59 AM
Wording, I would take up Sarah707 's suggestions.:thumbsup:

I prefer to be more colour co-ordinated, stick to green (to match the frogs) and black wording.

Also, I too think the frogs look a little frisky :laughing: :laughing: :laughing: Is there a different frog picture to use, or is that your own logo?

Great overall, just my opinion as you did ask :)

Good luck in filling spaces :)

gegele
29-04-2009, 07:15 AM
Good morning and thank you ladies!!


how do take them off???? i'm going to try to amend them but the frogs are staying LOL they're cute and their bits don't touch ah ah ah ah aha h ah ah

but yeah i think it make sense to add the lilttle froggies :blush:

sarah707
29-04-2009, 07:18 AM
how do take them off???? :

Let me know when you're ready and I'll walk you through it :D

gegele
29-04-2009, 07:40 AM
ready when you are
:D

gegele
29-04-2009, 08:03 AM
:clapping: :jump for joy: :jump for joy: I DID IT!!!!!!!!!!!!

:blush: :blush: not sure how but it worked

hooray!!!!

huggableshelly
29-04-2009, 08:06 AM
wooohoo well done xxx

Blaze
29-04-2009, 09:12 AM
Some other great suggestion...don't forget to add an "after" pic!:D