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LNena
08-03-2009, 11:53 AM
Please take a look at my new webside and let me nkow your opinions please

www.bilingualchildcare.co.uk

Pauline
08-03-2009, 12:22 PM
Hi Carmen

The first thing that I notice is that you call the sites 'websides' the correct term is 'website'

It looks a very interesting site and I will have a look around.

Thank you for the link to the Forum. :)

Pauline
08-03-2009, 12:27 PM
One other thing I just noticed, and I don't want to appear picky - just trying to help :) You say:

Bi.C is the only Childminding service in our area that has a webside specially designed to keep you informed of everything you need to know while your child(ren) is in my care.

Are you sure you are the only childminding service website in your area? As I am sure there are other childminders with websites in the Portsmouth area. I was just thinking that you have to be careful what you state as fact on websites. :)

LNena
08-03-2009, 02:20 PM
Thank you Paulina, I will correct that. When I first did it I thought that just a few childminders have a webside; but now thank to the forum I know now that they are lots!!!

LNena
08-03-2009, 02:25 PM
Done it Paullina, THANK YOU for your advice!:laughing:

angeldelight
08-03-2009, 07:43 PM
Thats great

Angel xx

Kelly
08-03-2009, 07:48 PM
Looks lovely, I did notice that the first time your refer to your childminding business, you have left the d out of childminding.

kelly

LNena
08-03-2009, 10:16 PM
THANK YOU Angel and Kelly for you comment and I added the "d". I read it, and read it and didn't notice. Your feedback just give me so much much much more confident

Beckieboo
10-03-2009, 12:21 PM
Great website, Well done!:)

LNena
10-03-2009, 04:12 PM
thank you Becki.

I was wondering if I should add more info about childminding?