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sprinkles
29-01-2013, 06:38 PM
I've just had this logo designed for me. What do you think? What would you change? I'm thinking a different sun?

Traceyx
29-01-2013, 06:42 PM
Oohhh i love this, very nice. Where did you make it from?

silvermist
29-01-2013, 06:45 PM
I like it too, bright and cheerful but I agree with you the suns face looks a little strange. No offence intended xx

Rick
29-01-2013, 06:50 PM
The sun looks ever so slightly menacing! Will this go on all your correspondence? Mine has a lot of blue in it and that's always the ink to run out first! Lots of colour on yours! Looks good though :thumbsup:

sprinkles
29-01-2013, 06:58 PM
The sun looks ever so slightly menacing! Will this go on all your correspondence? Mine has a lot of blue in it and that's always the ink to run out first! Lots of colour on yours! Looks good though :thumbsup:

I hadn't even thought about the ink :laughing: I'm not sure if it will go on everything, might just do some writing for p&ps etc, but it will be on business cards, advertising things etc.

sarah707
29-01-2013, 07:01 PM
If it's supposed to be a rainbow round the edge then it's - Richard of York gave battle in vain for the colours :laughing:

Would it look better without the sun and cloud? Are they just a bit too much when it's shrunk down small to go on a business card or letter head for example??

I really like it though it's bright and cheerful and shouts which you need to stand out from the crowd :D

sprinkles
29-01-2013, 07:11 PM
If it's supposed to be a rainbow round the edge then it's - Richard of York gave battle in vain for the colours :laughing:

Would it look better without the sun and cloud? Are they just a bit too much when it's shrunk down small to go on a business card or letter head for example??

I really like it though it's bright and cheerful and shouts which you need to stand out from the crowd :D

I was looking at it thinking 'that's not right' lol.

I never thought of it without the sun and clouds. What about making the sun a bit more fun but putting it in the middle where the other sun is and taking away the clouds?

Little Pickles
29-01-2013, 07:16 PM
Is it just me ....or does the cloud look a bit worried ?:o

sprinkles
29-01-2013, 07:18 PM
Is it just me ....or does the cloud look a bit worried ?:o

I did think that :laughing:

Rubybubbles
29-01-2013, 07:19 PM
bit too busy for me

sorry:o

ivy
29-01-2013, 07:21 PM
love it but also agree that the sun looked menacing .

TAZ
29-01-2013, 07:28 PM
Nice & colourful but think it might look better without the sun & cloud. :jump for joy:

sprinkles
29-01-2013, 07:30 PM
Nice & colourful but think it might look better without the sun & cloud. :jump for joy:

Have asked him to make the sun look a bit more fun and put it in the middle instead of the sunrise and take the clouds away :thumbsup:

Shamai
29-01-2013, 07:47 PM
In my opinion I don't think you need another sun around the edge as you've got one in the middle - maybe somehow make some sun rays come out of the one in the middle with a smiley face?? Not too sure about the clouds as it came across as unhappy when I first looked at it. Hope I've not offended anyone xx

sprinkles
29-01-2013, 07:50 PM
In my opinion I don't think you need another sun around the edge as you've got one in the middle - maybe somehow make some sun rays come out of the one in the middle with a smiley face?? Not too sure about the clouds as it came across as unhappy when I first looked at it. Hope I've not offended anyone xx

Thanks :) I've asked him to make the sun round the outside more fun and replace the one in the middle with the fun one then take the clouds away. He's doing it just now :D

RuthJ
29-01-2013, 07:52 PM
Have asked him to make the sun look a bit more fun and put it in the middle instead of the sunrise and take the clouds away :thumbsup:

Agree with the others that the faces aren't quite right! Looking forward to seeing the updated one! :)

sprinkles
29-01-2013, 07:56 PM
Agree with the others that the faces aren't quite right! Looking forward to seeing the updated one! :)

The sun had a huge nose :D Just waiting on him sending the new one over. I've got someone else designing one for me too so will see what they come up with.

lynncjt
29-01-2013, 09:04 PM
Really like it! Just wondered about the font? Would children be able to read it with the swiggly bits?

sprinkles
29-01-2013, 09:12 PM
Really like it! Just wondered about the font? Would children be able to read it with the swiggly bits?

I wondered this too, may ask him to change it.

sprinkles
29-01-2013, 09:14 PM
Ok so here is the updated one. I'm thinking of changing the font and the colour of the Bright Beginnings - thinking there's too much pink with it being right next to the pink on the rainbow?

silvermist
29-01-2013, 09:29 PM
Now that is lovely! Much better and yes I would change the pink writing to black so you can see it better. Brilliant, well done x

sprinkles
29-01-2013, 09:31 PM
Now that is lovely! Much better and yes I would change the pink writing to black so you can see it better. Brilliant, well done x

Thank you. I've asked him to move the sun and writing into the middle too - I hate things being squint :o

silvermist
29-01-2013, 09:32 PM
I really like this one. The sun looks friendlier now! :laughing:

TAZ
29-01-2013, 09:36 PM
Yes, that looks better. friendlier sun too. :clapping:

migimoo
29-01-2013, 09:47 PM
That's just lovely....well done you!

Traceyx
29-01-2013, 09:52 PM
Thought it looked great before, looks even better now!

sprinkles
29-01-2013, 10:02 PM
Here it is now! Red writing or black? Or another colour?

Going to ask him to move childminding down a bit as it's quite high up. Wonder if I'm annoying him yet :laughing:

silvermist
29-01-2013, 10:06 PM
Love it! Definately black writing though :thumbsup:

Traceyx
29-01-2013, 10:06 PM
The red made my eyes go all funny lol.. But then it may look different on a computer!

Shamai
29-01-2013, 10:09 PM
Yay looks fab - I liked the font in #20 but in black!! :jump for joy:

sprinkles
29-01-2013, 10:11 PM
Yay looks fab - I liked the font in #20 but in black!! :jump for joy:

Wasn't sure if it was too squiggly. I'll get him to send me it in both the fonts and then I can choose which one to use :)

sprinkles
29-01-2013, 10:39 PM
It's finished :D I love it!

Daisy De
30-01-2013, 07:45 AM
Very nice end result :thumbsup:

RuthJ
30-01-2013, 09:26 AM
Looks good! I really like the rainbow :thumbsup:

hectors house
30-01-2013, 09:27 AM
Well done - looks very professional - could link half of the characteristics of learning to your experience:

playing and exploring - engaging in new experiences and learning by trial and error

active learning - paying attention to details
showing belief that more effort or different approach will pay off
showing satisfaction in meeting own goals

creating and thinking - finding ways to solve problems
testing their ideas

And just goes to show that less is more, especially when it needs to be shrunk down to fit on stationery - much prefer the final sun - the first one looked like an octopus (or may it's because we are doing an underwater theme at the moment) :laughing:

Little Pickles
30-01-2013, 10:03 AM
Looks great well done :clapping:

lynncjt
30-01-2013, 01:10 PM
Looks great! Bright and friendly

Shamai
30-01-2013, 02:01 PM
It's finished :D I love it!

Well done, looks great :thumbsup:

pat75
30-01-2013, 02:49 PM
Final choice looks great. Well done.

ChocolateChip
30-01-2013, 04:58 PM
That's great hun, I think it was the eyebrows on the previous one that were not quite right?
I agree with you about making the font darker maybe so it stands out, but other than that it looks fab!!!
Would love to know where it came from and rough costs, if that's not being too cheeky :D


Just realised there is a later version with the red writing, fabulous!!!

sprinkles
30-01-2013, 06:23 PM
That's great hun, I think it was the eyebrows on the previous one that were not quite right?
I agree with you about making the font darker maybe so it stands out, but other than that it looks fab!!!
Would love to know where it came from and rough costs, if that's not being too cheeky :D


Just realised there is a later version with the red writing, fabulous!!!

I've had the writing changed to black :) I got it done by someone on eBay, only cost me £4.95 :D

boyle67
30-01-2013, 06:38 PM
Looks good! I would not have the sun or the clouds.... And think Richard of York etc for the order of rainbow colours.

sprinkles
30-01-2013, 07:32 PM
Looks good! I would not have the sun or the clouds.... And think Richard of York etc for the order of rainbow colours.

If you read the whole thread you would know that has all been taken care of :rolleyes:

littlelollies
30-01-2013, 07:37 PM
Love it very colourful and eye catching :-D

silvermist
30-01-2013, 07:54 PM
Love it! :clapping::clapping:

teacake2
31-01-2013, 01:01 PM
Like it very much but with the problems I am having with my eyesight at the moment it keeps winking at me:panic::panic::panic:
I have a phobia of eyes anyway so this is freaking me out.
Teacake2

sprinkles
31-01-2013, 01:48 PM
I've just been sent this one too. So, this one or he one I've already got? He's spelled beginnings wrong :laughing:

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lynncjt
31-01-2013, 02:17 PM
I like the original better - this one is confusing with the different fonts!

ChocolateChip
31-01-2013, 05:18 PM
I like the original better - this one is confusing with the different fonts!

Me too! :)